[TRANCE] Louk - "Your Shining (2004 Reworx)"

[Louk]

Here is a track I made called Your Shining - it was completed in march and is a high energy trancer.

http://louk.artists.mpfspromotions.com/your_shining.mp3

any comments would be appreciated! and if you want a high quality mp3 of it let me know and ill send you one.

Nice one.

Louk

[Hakka]

Louk you really should go and link up with Jon the Baptist and get producing some quality uplifting trance with him! you two would work so well!

The production work on this sounds clean and spot on with lay out. It's hard to pick faults with it technically. So many smaller sounds supporting the build up, it's nice to hear it flow so well. Percussion is neat and tidy.

My only criticism is the creativity or flair in the lay out. I mean its well made and sounds like everything is in the right place, but if its not a bit more unique or different I tend to get a little bored. Then again I'm a fussy cunt when it comes to layout/deliver of breaks and riffs. SHOKK & Chris Menzi is my fav so I always compare to that sort of design, which is unfair as this tune isn't that type. The break is a bit predictable, but its still nice sounding.

Good work Louk, I'd only ask that you try something a bit risky in the lay out and create really unique buildups and break downs to make it stand out more.

[Louk]

No worries mate :) To be fair though I steered away from making anything remotely hard and just went for an anthem riff same as usual.

Still would like to hook up with jon though!

Thanks for the comments!

Louk

[dee]

:clap: :clap: like it like it :cool: