Tune im working on - Gargleblaster....

[Dave Elyzium]

Only been working on this for an hour or so but would really appreciate any advice or comments on where to take it...not really had much time producing techno so hopefuly doesnt sound too bad....

heres the link to my soundclick page, the tune is the first on the list :)

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/daveelyziummusic.htm

thanks!