BloodStar - Study - another groove track...

[BloodStar]

hi m8s,

I'm working on some new drivin technno track. check it.:


BloodStar - Study (http://www.audionet.sk/Mp3/down.php?ids=3137)

any feedback is welcome,.,

\thanx

[xfive]

Overall sounds ok on these speakers.. (which aren't very good) but whatever sound comes in on the 2 and the 4 (clappy sound) sounds a tad bit out of time.... a smiggen too early.

Good start... vary it up a bit and fix that timing thing and then repost it ;)

[dan the acid man]

this is pretty nice, but i agree on the timing and maybe some re-editing on the arrangement

[BloodStar]

thanx, i"m working on it. there's something wrong with timing on some lines,. will fix it asap and then, post it :D

cheers....

[n.o.r.o]

dobry track od suseda z ciech :)

[fatcollective]

the first minute of this track i thought "this is fu*kin excellent" but then it didnt actually do anything after that. a couple of loops were a tad out of time, so get them tighter. it needs more variation aswel. but this is a great track to get stuck it to as you have already created a wikid groove. add a few noises/sounds/synths. to be honest though, it would be a decent B2 track, something just to throw in your set. overall though its got potential, so work on it and you'll have an excellnt track. ;)

[loopdon]

the first minute of this track i thought "this is fu*kin excellent" but then it didnt actually do anything after that. a couple of loops were a tad out of time, so get them tighter. it needs more variation aswel. but this is a great track to get stuck it to as you have already created a wikid groove. add a few noises/sounds/synths. to be honest though, it would be a decent B2 track, something just to throw in your set. overall though its got potential, so work on it and you'll have an excellnt track. ;)

this clap thing is a bit off. lose it or fix it. nice production. i would try and have the bassline go down at times (like @0:28) because it stays on one level.sth like 3bars high then one lower one. just an idea.

i do like it.