[HARDSTYLE] I Originate - work in progress

[Dave Elyzium]

Heres a hardstyle tune im currently working on and I'd really appreciate any feedback you want to give me, its called "I Originate" and heres the link: http://myweb.tiscali.co.uk/elyzium/i_originate.mp3

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[dj vorny]

hey dave man i realy like the kick drums and the mad fx stabs u got going off :twisted: and the vocal is cool ,the beassline is deep and throbing its a realy cool tune man :clap: lets here a finished version when its done :cool:

[EmotionComplex]

sounding smart mate, youve got the sound very upfront and wide which i like, sounds really full. but theres some low + mid distortion there at the moment though.

i love the feel to the track so far, its asking for acid :twisted:

[Chazbloke]

kick n bass are proper dirty, love the way it kicks in at 0.54 ! unsure of the screechy sequence personaly (but i'm really picky when it comes that sort of thing...)
be interesting where the track goes next - if it were me, i'd keep the screechy sequence as a secondary melody and find something else for the main part.....

[Dave Elyzium]

hey thanks for listening :) yeah i noticed the bass distortion after i mastered it thorugh wavelab but i wanted to get a smple up cos im chuffed with it so far so that will be rectified in the final mix...I was thinking of adding some gigi lav type acid :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:

[Dave Elyzium]

kick n bass are proper dirty, love the way it kicks in at 0.54 ! unsure of the screechy sequence personaly (but i'm really picky when it comes that sort of thing...)
be interesting where the track goes next - if it were me, i'd keep the screechy sequence as a secondary melody and find something else for the main part.....

yeah i know what your saying mate..its actually an indian tabla sample thats distorted to ****ery but im having a problem introducing anythign else with that as the main element as you were saying...

tiem to reach for a 303 (or plug in anyway) ireckon :twisted:

[dee]

:clap: :clap: like it mate

filthy ,filthy kick :clap: :clap:

[Jay M]

loving the kick n bass m8, look forward to hearing the finished version :twisted: