Just a few ideas I've been working on...

[j_s]

Short clip of a track I've reached a bit of a brick wall with quite early on. Ain't sure whether it's worth building on, but I thought a bit of feedback might help me put a new persective on it. Any thoughts, comments appreciated....

http://homepage.ntlworld.com/family.stevens2/1prev.mp3

[xfive]

This is pretty neat man.. can't comment on the fullness or anything right now as I am on shit speakers, but I like the pieces involved.
You're already building the track around the synth so I'd suggest continuing on that route or so..
Post up another version ;)

[DigitalDarkness]

Sounds pretty kickin... keep on with it

[ibbjamin]

I wouldn't abandon that track. I like the drop after the break; it hits, but doesn' come in and scare you - nice and smooth.

[j_s]

Cheers for the encouraging responses. I've got a few new ideas floating around in my head now, so I'm going to try and get back into this. Will post anything I come up with, might take some time though...

[dan the acid man]

pretty nice, it could just do with more bottom end