Rate/Slate my tune please...

[Jay Pace]

Hi

First tune from me - synth loop techno. Still needs tweaking, seeking advice, feedback, pointers and criticism from all you lovely people.

Link is here:

http://www.logarythms.com/growl.mp3

Ta'

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[loopdon]

wrong subforum...

[Jay Pace]

sorry...
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[detfella]

^^ what mr loop said

im noticing a similarity with our website urls!! lol

[yorkie]

^^ what mr loop said

im noticing a similarity with our website urls!! lol

maths and techno, the perfect combination:

(quick googler)




:eh:
http://www.aamt.edu.au/resources/catalogue/bulletin/technomaths.jpg

[yorkie]

to comment on the tune thou, lol...

i thnik it is a wee bit too linear for my liking, not enough going on, i thnk that the bass synth should come in slightly earlier, as its approx half way though the track until we start to hear it...

maybe drop the main synth during sections of the breakdown at the start and/or the HH...?

the percussion and kick do sound good though, i like the compression which gives a that classic pumping effect ;)

my two cents anyway...

/yorkii :)