offbeat track

[charlton]

:twisted: its not mixt yet so i hope you wile like this one

www.deepinthenight.com/charlton/02.mp3

[tooltech]

nice one.

but it needs a little bit more percussion ;)

[charlton]

nice one.

but it needs a little bit more percussion ;)thanx for the the advice

[duffdeal]

I really like this. I think the kick needs a bit of work, needs to be punchier.

[charlton]

I really like this. I think the kick needs a bit of work, needs to be punchier.thnax im giong 2 work on it

[professor]

are you using reason? this has the sound of reason...just a little flat all over...
despite the sound, I liked the composition...keep it up!

[Jack]

nice dark track.
treble seems a bit weak and in need of more.
melody is moody. :clap:

[charlton]

nice dark track.
treble seems a bit weak and in need of more.
melody is moody. :clap:thanks mate im working on it for sure