Something dark

[lau]

Track I've been working for a couple of days now.... Need to spend loads of time eq-ing it and do some more cuts & edits but just wanted to know what u guys think..

link (http://www.xs4all.nl/~rutgrrr/Slaughter%20(master).mp3)

tnx lau

[CORROSIVE]

:twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:

HARD AND DARK AS ****, i like,

[BRADLEE]

Fecking great hard techno man. Can't comment on the mix cause I'm in headphones, but that tune is wikkid man :twisted:

[NinjaTechno]

brilliant bit of kit

[lau]

Wow dudes tnx for the positive reactions...

Anyone got some comments on how to improve this one???

tnx lau

[BRADLEE]

well I did hear a little vocal during the breakdown that was a little distracting, but other than that..sounds really cool to me and edited very well.

[audioinjection]

damn, this is some hard, dark, disturbing techno, hard as nails

haha, i like how you threw in that little raggae sample in there

dope shit dude!

[Komplex]

that vocal thing is very strange hehe :) otherwise cool!

[Komplex]

double post.

[AcidMutant]

Nice production. I like the staccato syncopated synth line.

The only comments I'd make are that there are a few sections when not an awful lot happens. I'd be tempted to put a little more variation in:

The metallic screetchy sound at the start - maybe automate some EQ or put some subtle phasing effects on to make it "move".

The drums are good but I'd personally add some more variations - like occasionally put double the number of shaker/hat sounds in on the odd beat ever few bars.

Around 3.45 theres a nice synth line in there but it's a little low in the mix.

Also I would be tempted to put a quick 'record stop' effect in there somewhere for a split second or so but that's the kind of cheesy geezer I am (I think it would be nice to drop the volume to zero for a beat or two before pounding back into this full volume material).

Good work!

[lau]

TNX for the comments!!! Already have made some improvements to the track...
Unfortunatly, but fortunatly have to go snowboarding for a week now :lol: ...
So will post the updated version next week.....

lau :rambo:

[j_s]

sick stuff.
could do with perhaps another leading element to give the track more of a focal point.