New hard trance track !!!

[bub]

Hi

my name is Josh Kay i've produced this track and would like an honest opinion of it. Thanx for listening hope you like it look forward to hearing your comments.

Hard Trance Seduction 01 (http://www.klout.co.uk/hard_trance_o1.mp3)

[bub]

oops....


track link is



Hard Trance Seduction (http://www.klout.co.uk/hard_trance_01.mp3)

[Addict]

wrong forum buddy

[WEZ]

In there bub dude

http://www.blackoutaudio.co.uk/phpBB2/viewforum.php?f=12

[otraxx]

mate, its got originality.. u really need to think more about your riffs, the snare works good.
but the main riff sounds horrible...
maybe change it to a lighter synth..
good though, mental as ****.