Just played this out for 1st time.

[curly]

I played this tune out last weekend at polymorphic and it seemed well taken by the crowd, but it still need improving

any sergestions
http://www.studio61.org/tunes/synthmeup.mp3

[NinjaTechno]

had a listen m8,pretty ghood track reminds me of mills and cymbol in one. ;)

[dirty_bass]

Production is good, although at 7:25 I found it a bit long, and by halfway, it was needing some other elements to keep it interesting.
I`d say build on what you have here. Add some more elements. Maybe some more percussion.