Arty Visual - A Dark Portrait (a downtempo track)

[ArtyVisual]

wrote a downtempo track called a dark portrait...
A Dark Portrait
http://felinefrequencies.com/artyvisual/Arty%20Visual%20-%20a%20dark%20portrait.mp3

and i posted these two tracks previously but in the wrong forum...


Mantra
http://felinefrequencies.com/artyvisual/Arty%20Visual%20-%20mantra%20(unmastered).mp3
The Driving Digeridoo
http://felinefrequencies.com/artyvisual/Arty%20Visual%20-%20The%20Driving%20Digeridoo.mp3



please post comments if you have any...constructive criticism...etc

[j_s]

The Driving Digeridoo


This is cool, not heard many tracks in this vein before. Like the organic feel. Treble could be brighter, but the mix is quite clear & distinct,



Mantra


This sounds quite interesting too. I think the production lets it down though, the kick is quite flabby and there seems to be clipping in a few places. You'd probably benefit from going over the eq again, cos theres some cool ideas in this that don't quite have the impact they could have....

[dirty_bass]

I`m not really into the music, it`s a little too tribal drift for me.
But the production is pretty tight.

On mantra there`s a distortion problem with the kicks that sounds out of place, and I`d take a look at what is causing that.


the Driving didgeredoo is a little flat, and could do with more depth in the low end, and more brightness at the top.