Somthing slow and moody......unfinished

[Mindful]

I dont realy like the idea of posting my music cause I dont think its good enuff yet.....but I want to finish this track so could do with some input and fresh ears.
any feedback good or bad would be cool.Thanks



www.iluvtekno.com/Casual_violence__Rotate_cube.mp3

[BRADLEE]

nice minimal dark little groover right here. Can't wait to hear the finished product!!!

[audioinjection]

oops, didnt see this thread, i replied in your other one

but here is what i said


hey, this track sounds dope

i like that dark atmosphere and groove to it, good stuff man

[xfive]

Pretty nice start.. I like sounds used.
Could go for some more low end... its pretty flabby/hollow right now.
Kick is fine tho.

Keep us posted ;)

[Mindful]

Could go for some more low end... its pretty flabby/hollow right now.
;)

Cheers geezer will look into that.

[dirty_bass]

wow, I like this.
I`m liking the fact that we are starting to get more variety of techno in this forum, it`s about time.

Lovely subtle ambience in the back of this, understated, but full of menace.
Nice little percussion build.
Top end could be brighter, I know you are kind of keeping a very tense and restrained sound in this track, but you could still get a little more brightness into the top end.

I would say as you continue with this track, try to go beyond the surgeon esque, nothing but ambience and a beat, and try to add something musical to it, but it`s early days and so far I`m really really into this.

[Mindful]

Top end could be brighter, I know you are kind of keeping a very tense and restrained sound in this track, but you could still get a little more brightness into the top end.
cheers will do


I would say as you continue with this track, try to go beyond the surgeon esque, nothing but ambience and a beat, and try to add something musical to it
Noted.

thanks for comments.

[Sunil]

Sounds good, very hypnotic. I like the minimal feel of it, everything is running into each other nicely :clap:

[j_s]

cool stuff. dark & murky vibes...
it's maybe a little lacking in punch, but i guess that's not what you are aiming for with this...
some more traditional musical devices would probably work well & make the track a bit more memorable....

[stjohn]

very nice atmosphere mate!!!

[Mindful]

thanks for the feedback people :clap: very helpful indeed.
I will be working on this tonight.
gonna try and sort out the top and bottom ends,extend the intro,add a few more percussion elements and hopfully move on and add some chords.

[lau]

Yeah..!!

Liking this... Just try to work it out a bit more... like the intro though heavy nd dark !!!

nice dark stuff...!! Looking forward to your work of tonight..!!


:rambo:

[Mindful]

Been working on this last night and most of today.its doing my head in a bit :rambo:
Think ive give the top end a bit of a polish but struggleing with that bottom end.
Also added a few little bits.
Will try and post results this week.Need a break from it for now my head hurts :lol: