Casual violence____Sick sensi and Warrior class

[Mindful]

hey peeps
Two of mine both unfinished first one minnimal
Warrior classhttp://s23.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2YB7V6RRBVOWU1H32XQ4RC1GSK


the second one......er....isnt :eh:
Sick sensihttp://s22.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0AMA7Y7MLSVGG0UT7NTEOVLPJY


Any feedback good or bad would be super cool thank you ;)

[xfive]

Links are bunk man.. I think all you managed to upload were the symbolic links to the cd tracks... ;)

[lau]

:eh:

not working for me either..

[nova]

yeah theres loads of different links to yousendit aint there. just gotta get the right 1 haha!. i was gonna hav a listen anyways dude ;)

[Mindful]

:doh: Mother trucker!

See what happens when sombody dont host for me I fu*k it up :lol:
Ill have to jib home and get the disk and try again :rambo:

[nova]

:lol:

[Mindful]

New link :pray:


http://s7.yousendit.com/complete.aspx


just the one this time ;)

[lau]

Probably me but its asking for email adresses etc????

You really are the man when it comes to technology arent you?? :lol:

[Mindful]

:lol: *pounds key board to make words in caveman fashion*



kin hell a thread full of links what an idiot :doh:

errrrrr..........try this if it dont work then well **** knows

http://s7.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1YBZR8CRX5Z5J1IZRJ86CYLTQI

[Mindful]

Can sombody else please let me know if this works please.

Pulling my fu*king hair out

[xfive]

Aye it works... listening now.

[Mindful]

:lol: thank **** it works.
its not finished by the way peeps

[xfive]

This is pretty cool...
I can't hear any bass really.. but that may just be these headphones.. Things are also a bit too dry.
I like the ideas but I think you just need a couple more elements ontop of the breaks that are in there to mix it up a bit... some eerie synth stabs or drone.. something...

Sounds good so far though ;)

[Mindful]

your bloody bass mad you :lol: only kidding
you might be right ive cut quite alot of bass out of it on the master plus the bassline only realy happens every now and then(about 3 times every two bars)so will look in to that thanks.
Regarding the dry comments Theres a few elements (mainly the tom patterns)that I was thinking the same so again thanks will look into that also.
will add a few more elements ie sweeps and eerie synths at pionts to try to keep it intreasting also Theres no hats yet bizarly so im gonna work on a few hat patterns before I get my head down.


as allways thanks for feedback very usefull

[xfive]

Yes the hats would surely help indeed :lol:

[Mindful]

P.S.any hints on giving those toms some life without putting any more verb on them?
I had them sounding pretty good for a bit with quite a good reverb but it seemd to set them too far back(which made them sound good but had a negative effect on the mix)

thanks ;)

[xfive]

Saturation compression ;)
You could go other routes but I seem to always have the best of luck with that.

http://www.digitalfishphones.com/main.php?item=2&subItem=3

[Mindful]

thanks mate you the man.
You suggest I use that on the overall mix or as a track insert?

pehaps Ill just try both.

Again thanks.

[xfive]

Well you can do both I s'pose but for giving one element some bigness just use it as an insert ;)

[Mindful]

;)

[lau]

NICE!!!

Like the atmosphere of the track.!!!!

Think you can get more power out of the track if you mix it in a different way.... it does sound a bit dry like xfive said...

Maybe throw another kick over the one you already have... ( a heavy one that is :twisted: . .).. .to boost up the kicks a bit ...!!!

aightt repost when you've made some improvements!!! :rambo:

[Mindful]

thanks for feedback Lau
I may try somthing with the kick as suggested alltho I was going to try to add a fatter bassline yet,not sure the way I had planned this track was for it to be more about the sounds and rythm than the bottem end to be honest but as its progressing I think I might try and make it a bit more club freindly and perhaps up the tempo slightly :twisted: