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WEZ
18-06-2003, 08:50 PM
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Like some feedback peeps on our first 3 unfinished tracks if you would ,

Cheers all ,

http://www.screwface.co.uk/wezentiger/THE-CORE.mp3

http://www.screwface.co.uk/wezentiger/THIS-IS-****-THIS.mp3

http://www.screwface.co.uk/wezentiger/CHAINSAW-3000.mp3

P.S : Big Thanx to Tom@Religion
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WEZ
18-06-2003, 08:51 PM
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Like some feedback peeps on our first 3 unfinished tracks if you would ,

Cheers all ,

http://www.screwface.co.uk/wezentiger/THE-CORE.mp3

http://www.screwface.co.uk/wezentiger/THIS-IS-****-THIS.mp3

http://www.screwface.co.uk/wezentiger/CHAINSAW-3000.mp3

P.S : Big Thanx to Tom@Religion

this is this link down , back tommorow
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karl54
21-06-2003, 11:30 PM
dude. uploaded em as .rm or .asf,, im only on a 56k moden, as are most people. id like to give you fead back but its taking too long to downlaod...

karl54
21-06-2003, 11:48 PM
@ > 0.50 mins the tune should kick in. Intro is too long and let down when tune finaly kicks in.

@ > 2.31 mins , When the tune kicks in there neads to be more samples & a bit more noise, the mian tune is too plain.

maybe an acid line, and a more distorted kick (warmduscher style), neads to be used as the main tune.

this is just constructive critisism mate, its not a bad tune, although its not one id buy at the moment. there are some nice VST being used and some nice stereo.

god ive got some meny idea's for tunes at the moment its pissing me off cos i dont know how to use the damm prog's!!

laterz.

karl54
22-06-2003, 12:00 AM
chainsaw has deffo got potential.
dark and scary! nice!

but after the first brake you nead some put some kind of energy into it, like some nasty rifts, some magical mellody that sounds more like a rift, and ****s with you head at 280 bpm with good stereo, whislst the kick runs at 140...

humm hope this helps.

WEZ
22-06-2003, 12:59 PM
Thanx m8 for the feedback , they are not finished yet so there is still room for inprovement !

This is This works in other Topics , this one got barred due to it saying F#ck , the others work try that , nothing but great feed back on that tune !

Ill look into different file formats on the website and my server etc.....

If you wanna get started with tunes , il gladly give you a hand , im in the process of uploading samples on my server etc....

PM me if you wanna hand m,8 !

WEZ
22-06-2003, 01:05 PM
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