Whats wrong with this?

[AcidTrash]

Apart from the fact it sounds like hard house and it's trapped in my usual formula what could I do to improve this?

http://www.squatjuice.com/mp3/acidtrash/dreamsweep.mp3

[fatcollective]

well id say firstly, slow the ****er down man!! its way 2 frantic & it sounds a little flat, give it some beef man!! production wise its ok!!

[BRADLEE]

Well wrong is all in the perception of the indavidual. I do think personally it is a bit fast, but for you maybe it's just right.

However I do think it could be more punchy with your kick, and perhaps a bit brighter on some of the mid range. Some of the samples just seem to be running a much higher Volume than other sounds. Doesn't really sounds balanced to me in that respect.

Over all though I would say nice track Pete. Just beef it up in the bottom, sort out your mids a bit, then if you wish to, slow her down. Although they never feel the same as when you made them if you alter the tempo. That's my opinion anyways.