Bit of feedback please!

[Barely Human]

This is somethin im working on at the mo. Im just wondering your opinions on the general sound of it before i get stuck into it. Let me know if you think the bass should be dirtier or whatever.

Cheers

IQ

--->Here you should click<--- (http://iq.britersen.co.uk/undergoing.mp3)

[acidhead]

the kick should stop your heart , we need more kick :D

tho still ****ing good mate ,

ps// listening on phones - not tried it thru my monitors so it may be ok