Scott Gray - Saturn

[eyes without a face]

hey peeps, just thought id post this new track i worked up using a sample of the recent sound recording of Saturn, needs a few more edits im gonna work on later but here it is so far, hope u enjoy

http://www.iterativemusic.com/~scottg/music/Scott_Gray_Saturn.mp3

all comments welcome chaps

ta

[fatcollective]

THIS IS SHITE MAN.................































only jokin, i'll check it out when i get home ;)

[BRADLEE]

Yeah it's ok I guess. Just not really a fan of the synths used in there personally. However there are some other cool elements in the tune.

The fact is, I know that Scotty can do better than this.

[fatcollective]

not really my cuppa, seemed a little loose in areas...but its different and there are some good ideas in there. just too mellow for me.

[eyes without a face]

well i cant account for personal tastes obviously, as we all cant

appreciated tho mo fo's :twisted:

[BRADLEE]

well i cant account for personal tastes obviously :lol:

Indeed

[xfive]

This is a nice backbone for something, but it didn't really seem to go anywhere mate.. need to add some more pieces and break up the arrangement a bit I think :)

[eyes without a face]

yeah definately needs more stuff, this is the fruits of about 4 hours or so this morning, il work on it tommorow some more, definately a few bits i want to change already

cheers dude

[dan the acid man]

love the bassline, and those atmospherics, not sure on some of those squelches/zaps, they're distracting my attention away from the song too much.

also that ride gets a little lost in the mix, but nice starting point for a tune

[dirty_bass]

I like this.
Funky and deep.
It`s definitely worth continuing on with.
however some of the elelments don`t sit quite right.
There`s no balance between the levels of the kick and the snare.
The snare is a counterpoint part for the kick, yet it is a bit too loud, and a bit too thing.
I think maybe the second distorted kick would work better if it was clean.
Also the kicks overall could have more top end presence.

Strings are lush.
Rides maybe stand out a bit too much.

Yeah, liking it, just needs some proper time spent to get it all working.

[eyes without a face]

cheers guys, much appreciated, can definately see what you are on about

looking forward to working on this some more tommorow afternoon
:twisted:

[audioinjection]

yeah i agree with steve on this, finish it up!

[The Overfiend]

With some random percs hear and there this could be great more elements and breakups. good stuff yeah i said it

[Evil G]

nice sounds in this. the bass sounds really good here, as do the atmospheric sounds. could do with a bit more drive maybe, but defo liking it so far.

[Mindful]

Wow this is realy ****ing good man.
Its got a great feeling to it kind of espionage like(if that makes sense)reminds me of a mechanical assassin sneaking round,breaking gaurds necks,busting high security safes and stealing highly importent top secret nucular tactical information.
haha and thats what it makes me see without having to close my eyes :lol:
Bassline is dope as it the drum pattern.
Also digging the lill bleepy sounds and stuff.
The atmospherics and main string/pad is great it adds feeling to somthing that allready has a strong vibe.

Hats off :clap:
This is my favorite track ive heard of yours man cant wait to hear the finished piece.

I would be mooching round a club with a shifty look on my face if this came on(even tho this is more than a club track)

Go on with yo bad self

[eyes without a face]

:lol: haha mindful thats a great description might send it off to Playstation haha

cheers guys, appreciated, going to work on this later hopefully add a few extra elements and polish the mix a bit

appreciated one and all

[Mirsha]

It's a good track but I wouldn't buy it on vinyl, it just lacks a sense of dirction purpose that I lok for in a tune.

[stjohn]

cool track... definately a breather for during a night of heaviness.

youve created a nice atmosphere, and it evolves nicely in the background.
if you change it up a bit during the song and maybe a a really subtle breakbeat, here and there, i think you might be pushing some quality electronica rather than deep broken techno.

either way i liked the sound of it, and i would play it at a crescendo of a set! :clap: