Hardy-J Vs Seb Neitsa - Ill Mechanics Series 02

[Seb Neitsa]

Hey !
Here is the second title of the series.

Hope it will give us lot of comments :wink:

Thx !

DL (http://www.hardy-j.de/music/track/hardy-jvssebneitsa_ill_mechanics_series_part_2.mp3)

[V..]

Wasn`t really into this, it didn`t really do enough for me.
The sound is very dry overall, and seems very digital and loopy.
Could do with some warmth and width and more analog-ness in the mix to make it larger overall and more polished.
There`s almost no bass, which makes everything feel very thin.
The clap is a bit loud and seems to throw the groove out.
Hats are too quiet, and don`t offset the kick.
Nothing really seems to change throughout this track, bar a few clever edits.

[dan the acid man]

yeah, some nice elements, it just needs warming up alot, needs much fatter bass in there.

and unless your going for a loopy tool, then this needs to progress more, the edits are cool though

[Seb Neitsa]

Thx for your advices

[orac]

really like when rides comes up in ~1 min, some more edits will be good also cause its a little loopy, but overall i like it :- )

[orac]

now i think that its maybe not about edits so much, but just try to add new sounds, some fx etc

this track reminds me stigmata stuff, thats good :- )

[Seb Neitsa]

thx a lot !