Sunday Morning Drama - new tune

[fresh_an_funky_design]

First tune i've posted on ages, any feedback would be wicked, the production is a bit more raw than usual.

Joe Giacomet - Sunday Morning Drama
http://www.morepunkthanfunk.com/jgiacomet-smd.mp3

[Jay Pace]

Interesting!

Like the fairly free form drum programming - and thought the "raw" feel worked really well.
Production was generally top notch I thought - tight & crisp.

The bass didn't really work for me - I wasn't keen on the way it kept changing notes. Felt that it stopped the tune developing a groove as it kept changing and every time it did so it kinda re-started the tune. Personally - I would make it a bit more structured, felt that the track miandered about a bit without really ever settling. But this is just my personal opinion, and you might not have been aiming for that anyways.

Good work though mate

[fresh_an_funky_design]

yeah i agree the bass needs work. I mixed it down earlier and there wasnt enough sub so wacked some extra notes under neath and a bit more eq and it seems to have lost some of its groove.

Cheers for listening & comments