[odd techno] Jay Pace - Snayle...

[Jay Pace]

Bit of a weird track but I'm pretty happy with it.

First tune I've made in a quite a while - feedback always appreciated.

www.logarhythms.co.uk/Snayle.mp3

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[SUSTAIN_RELEASE]

hi!! good work man! i realy like the dark bass at the beginning
I like when the acid sounds gone up, construction is good and clean!
I will have just seen a larger kick because is it a little too in high.
this is just my opinion and sorry for my bad english LoL
Greetz

[rhythmtech]

hey hey!! nice little groove you got goin on there. reminds me of a mellow hardfloor, some very nive synth lines playin with each other.

i think the beat needs a little work as its a little simplistic BUT this kinda tune isn't really about the beat so what do i know, eh? :) also maybe the drums are a little to dry?

it all sounds quite nicely put together. cant fault the structure at all.

good job over all. now i'm gonna have a nice lil smoke and listen to it again.

[fresh_an_funky_design]

cool tune, bit melodic for my tastes.

I agree the beat could do with a bit of work, mayb just a few pattern changes.

Good work on getting all those synths to work together nicely.

Cant comment on production as i'm on laptop speakers.

[Jay Pace]

Good feedback thanks guys.

I wanted the beat fairly sparse because the main elements are the synth & melodies and I didn't want the beat to detract from them. But I've probably also just been a bit lazy and could do more...

Will do some more work over the weekend.

Cheers for listening guys

[Jay Pace]

Done a rework. Re-did the cymbals and highend, put more movement in the drums & a few more pattern changes, a slight restructure and more mastering.

Feedback always a bonus
;)

www.logarhythms.co.uk/Snayle.mp3

[dirty_bass]

Interesting old skool viber.

I`d say that kick could pack more sub, as could the bass.
This has an analogue feel, but lacks warmth, partly because of the thin bottom end I think.

Other than that bar a few tweaks this is cool, although not my cuppa.

[Jay Pace]

Cautiously added more sub and cleaned it up a little. Bit more compression, bit more space.

Have a gig tomorrow, will have to cross fingers it translates welll on a proper rig.

The uncertainty is horrible...

[Evil G]

not too keen on that 80's popcorn synth, but the big acidy stuff sounds nice.

[xfive]

I think you should carve a tiny amount of the top of the bass and leave room for more of the bottom of the kick, it will push everything along even more. Other levels sounded good. Sounds like 6am sunrise at the rave music, cool stuff ;)

[Jay Pace]

Cut top end bass out of the sub - nice one. Hadn't thought of that.

80s popcorn? hehehe good description.

[Aratron]

downloaded this. i must say i think its great.
starts off bubbly and acidic.
then becomes some catchy early 80's obscure BBC childrens ino-tainment theme tune.
****ING QUALITY.

[danielmarshall]

Nice and lighthearted, made me think of arcade game music :) I think that bass in the beginning is just too loud though. Nice dirty sound, but it drowns out the kick.