Casual violence - Reduced to love(deep industrial techno)

[Mindful]

Hey guys
A track im doing at present.

just realy enjoying making music and not trying to sound like any sound inperticular.
It just happens to allways be dark and techno like.

Anyway

http://beta.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=6E336CE1D1992FBD

Any comments or suggestions are very welcome thanks.

[Mindful]

Still a work in progress by the way :)

[dirty_bass]

this is fantastic.
I won`t comment too much on the production as it`s a work in progress but it sounds pretty good anyway.

This is great, we`ve gotten to see you develop now into an artist with your own voice and vision, and really more people should be giving you props.
Your riding the edge of a new wave man, it`s great to hear.

Loving this, when finished I`m sure it`s gonna be a really great piece of work.

[Mindful]

aw shucks
cheers bro

[Evil G]

i really like where this is going. the pad that sortof drives the track from the back seat at the beginning is right on.

[BloodStar]

nice one. really digging your way of working with atmo sounds and background ambients. heavy feeling it.

i really dont know what to comment here as i like it as it is. very good work..

[BRADLEE]

Really nice emtional stuff Steve. Great off beat kicks, Sweet dark moody pads, some nice little vox snippets as percussion elements, and an overall nice arrangement as well. Can't wait to hear the final version since you're still working on it homie. Phenominal tune bro.

[loopdon]

really really solid! big

[stjohn]

quality stuff man..... with you all the way on that 1 !!!!

[danielmarshall]

This track really takes me places... A post apocalyptic city scape seems to be formed in my mind when I close my eyes and trip out to it. Truly origional. I like the others can't wait to hear the finnished version, but please don't rush it on our account - I want to hear you at your very best :)

[Mindful]

Aw thanks for listening guys.
The feedback is real good too so again thanks.

http://213.129.73.14/members/my_tracks/audio/DT_ACF25373979133.mp3

Anyhow heres an update.
Still wish to do a bit of punctuation in the track and Im wanting to add some sort of dubby bleepy type synth for all the little crossovers.

Also Im unsure as to weather too place the beatless section at the end in the middle as a break rather than an outro(mainly because im sure that the hip hop style beat would sound wicked in a club)

Again feedback and advice would be very nice thank you.

[stjohn]

still sounds sweet...ive had a lsiten on my monitors and that bass is a monster.... in a "im a monster bassline without wanting to be one" kinda way.

by that i mean it still suits the eeriness of the track....

one thing tho...when everything is playing around 3:45, the hi end on the kick could be a tad louder IMO.
really like your shit man, keep it up!!

[Mindful]

Ok thanks for pointing that out ill check that later skeez.
And thanks for listening twice.

[rhythmtech]

nice... really likin it! good stuff m8

[Mindful]

finished(i think)
I was going to post it up but ive just listend and ive renderd the fuc ker with the kick channels muted, bah.
Ill post it up tommoro.
Ive changed the arrangment about so the outro is now in the middle of the song as a break and its now got a rythm outro for mixing over, sounds much better.

[xfive]

Beautiful man.. love it. Right up my alley. :clap:
Only thing I think would be cool is if you had a bit more of a slow build in the beginning.. Seems like you're giving away too much off the bat. It would be cool to hear it start off really simple and generic and then suddenly have each piece take over.
My $0.02 ;)

[Mindful]

Cheers mate.
Yeah maybe, Ill have a play with that idea.

Anyway.


http://213.129.73.14/members/my_tracks/audio/DT_ACF26D82628012.mp3

Im thinking its finished (maybe a few small things)
I feel quite pleased at the moment but ill leave it for a week or so and see if theres anything I want to do with it.

[Mindful]

oh still any feedback would be very nice thankyou.

[djshiva]

this is creepy. sounds like some metallic snaky thingy is slithering through the speakers at the beginning. and the cymbal flams maintain that feeling. sounds like a rattle on a rattlesnake.

love. it.

[The Divide]

Quality! Need we say more

[robin m]

This is absolutely f*cking lovely. Real class.

I honestly can't think of one thing to criticise (and believe me I'd love to :razz:), you can really tell you've put helluvalot of work in and it's completely paid off.

Hats off to ya :clap: :cool:

[smeerkees]

I'm curious.

[smeerkees]

Mmm forget the reaction above. Wrong post.

About the track:

Very nice ambient sound. You got a real nice atmosphere there. The percussions are good too. Nice arrangment. Can't make any critical note. Nice going!

[Mindful]

Wow thanks for listening guys.
@Robin I think it was more fluke of the parts I programmed working well toghether and the fluke of the vibe sounding ...erm vibey rather than the hard work I put in haha

Again thanks guys:)

[dan the acid man]

sick, twisted, dirty, creepy, rotting, smelly, dripping with slime, i love it :lol:

this is great, it just needs tightening up in the eq department

[Mindful]

this is great, it just needs tightening up in the eq department

how dare you.......






Haha
cheers for the listen mate