2 mins of a track i started..looking for feedback

[Dave Elyzium]

http://www.dave-elyzium.co.uk/newtrack.mp3

appreciate initial reactions :)
thanks!

[robin m]

Obiously a long way to go before this one's finished but it's headin in the right direction for sure.

Love the short breakdown, it keeps the rolling feel of the track going very well and the bendy bass sound at the start of it is very nice indeed. I'd tone the hats that come in on 1:40 down a bit, they're a bit loud & harsh I think... but there's obviously lots of tinkering to be done before it's finished so no point me saying anything about production really, I'll shut up :)

I'll come back to have a listen to it when you've worked it out a bit more, that's for sure - well done :clap: