techno track i started - plz av a listen!

[Dave Elyzium]

just a little sample for now - please let me know hwat u guys think!

remember i dont make techno so go easy on me ;)

www.dave-elyzium.co.uk/newtech.mp3

[Mindful]

Not bad dude
Nice and clanky.
I thought that maybe thae kick dominates the mix when it comes in.
short clip so thats all I can say realy:)

[xfive]

Bit short to comment on fully, but I'd say you need some more bass in there, and some processing to warm everything up a bit.