A wee Tune I'm working on - Any feedback much appreciated

[michael00elder]

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=VQY73S1K

This is just a wee tune I've beenworking on, Still needs a lot of work dijn. I just wondred if anyone could have wee listen and offer any kinf i

[michael00elder]

Sorry, I was a bit ripped when I put that post up. Like I said, the tune's a long wayn off completion, I just wanted to get some feedback, helpful criticism!!!!!!!!!

[dan the acid man]

how dead is it in here, i've given michael some feedback on msn about this tune.

[LEE.S.I]

not sure how far your with it now but what are you aiming for with it,more Trance i take it?

its hard for me to critisize beacuse i cant do no better at the mo lol but fair play m8 ya giving it a go,your only gona learn from where ya go wrong/rigth

keep it up man