Something new - not quite sure where to go with it!

[ERROR404]

Yeah, I've written this over the last day or so, not quite sure what to do with it.... as it is its a pretty functional bit of "electronic" techno, but it needs something else to lift it above being simply rhythmical i think

DL here (http://www.in2techno.com/error404/Error404%20-%20Waiting%20for%20Simon.mp3)

I've tried various of melodies and warped synth sounds etc but can't get anything to sit right lol

Any of you audio warriors got any bright ideas???!!

Error :)

[jk_scowling]

Really liking the beat man, changes about a bit with some cool edits which keeps it varied. Sounds a bit like exium or something. I think you need to give the other parts more of a sense of space though, get some reverb and delay on them.