concrete shoes

[ollie303]

something i finished last week, not groundbreaking stuff but feels like im coming along a bit production wise so im stoked with it.
any advise / comments / tips appreciated!
http://bad-robot.co.uk/concrete_shoes.mp3

[jk_scowling]

file not found?

[ollie303]

sorry edited it now, should be there

[jk_scowling]

Cool man, production sounds pretty good. Like the percussion sounds at the start. Not exactly my cup of tea but good work.

[loopdon]

Production is pretty sawwweeet. Instantly sounded 'pro' to me. The tune is well nice as well. Maybe tone the highs down a tad bit but only if you want to. The kick is nice and thumpy. Well done. Esp liked the 'white noise with vocals behind them'-part.

Edit: Mebbe add some more real (!) sub weight to either bass or kicks, sounds a little like maxxbass in bizness.


Still fat as **** this tunage!!!!

[MARK ANXIOUS]

you know, i really liked this..

i don't think you can go much further with this...

it's a b side track though... if i were you, i'd leave this and move on..

good track!

[ollie303]

well happy to read all that, glad your into it.

think im going to leave it as it is, when ever i go back into a track i always mess it up, and this is pretty much the first tune ive done i havnt gone off after a week, so ill leave it at that

thanks for listening

[paulcortex]

nice production....sounds wicked...nice one :)

[p_brane]

i love it. love it . love it

good work. cant comment on production (laptop speaker) but the tunes great

i really dig the loop 3/4 way in with the voice behind the noise

keep it up

P_

[Jak]

sounds big! nice track man, I'm feelin the warehouse vibe here. maybe it's a b-side track as said above but def a really good b-side track.

[BloodStar]

not my cup of tea, but still good. interesting edits. nice.