[HARD TRANCE] Log:One and Jon the Beeptist - Invisible

[baptismo]

Got together with me good buddy logi wan to create this hard trancer, just wondered what your opinions of it are? Its quite a standard hard trancer, bit harder than i would usually write personally, but hope you like! Were already in the process of changing some parts in the track, so this isnt going to be the final released version... but if youve any ideas it'd be great to take them on board :lol:

www.highfishrecordings.co.uk/sneaky/invisible.mp3

[acidhead]

loverrrrrllllllyyyyyyyy

[Jay M]

already know my views on it m8 ;)

get in there :lol:

[Carl]

good stuff boys :clap:

[darkstar]

Top stuff... I love the break down and the little voice bit!

Excellent work as normal!!!

[WEZ]

100% nice , feedback given on msn ladz , cman !

[DJ Corbzy]

Hmmmmm.... :hmm:

I'm really not too sure about this one boys.... :scratch:

The trance in the break is nice, but the bassline is too 'weird'....It was too weak when it comes back in, I also thought the riff was quite similar to something that Logan had done in the past, also didn't like that snare/clap, too loud and too harsh, some of the noise were also quite loud and harsh...

The Kick is quite lame aswell I thought...

Sorry boys, not one for me... :cry:

[Dan.T.]

I actually agree with Corbzy!!!! :shock: :shock: :doh:



Sorry boys... :dontevengothere:

[log:one]

right corbz you little skiv i just spoke to jon and you can consider your debt of 40 pounds doubled, and it will continue to double every week until you pay him back.





hehehe... only joking. nice one for that, like jon said there's still stuff that we're going to change so we'll take your comments into consideration. ta!

[DJ Corbzy]

:lol:

Well I'd rather be honest and constructive than Lie and pretend to like a tune, this is probs the first thing I havent liked by either yourself and jon....and I said what I didnt like aswell...

Fair play Mr Yule Log... ;)

[majortom]

dont hold back corbzy mate, lets hope you like the sleve :lol:

[DJ Corbzy]

:lol:

Nothing like a good sleeve, or a nice porn pic disc.... :twisted:

[majortom]

jut not enough of them going around :lol:

[Paul Nisbet]

I Quite like it, but the synth is quite similer to the last few productions from jon?!

Other than that, deffo into it!

[baptismo]

cheers for your comments guys, all hae been taken on board. The track is still a work in progress, and we havent worked on it for a few weeks but will get crackin soon i hope :)

Found your comments a bit harsh corbzy, seeing as your a mate i thought you may have toned down the level of your post a bit, fair play though... your opinion is gratefully recieved.
I Didnt really agree with things being loud and harsh, this is a pre-mastered version, thats how we wanted things to sound... also didnt find much constructive about your post : 'the kick is lame', but already asked ya what you meant so happy days all round :)
Also this track has a lot of log influences as its for his E.P. so we tried to use a lot of log ideas, thats why the riff may sound like a log riff!

Thanks for everyone elses comments, and if anyone has any decent porn we can consider for the sleeve (just to please cobrzy;)) please mail them to us! :lol: - and even if it doesnt suit a sleeve, send em anyway!

[Louk]

wicked beys sounds well nice to me i like it a lot

Louk

[Hakka.]

great track and great build ups and love the little acidy bit in the background. top stuff.

the kick is FAR to weak in my opinion... please beef this up or us a totally different kick all together.

[EmotionComplex]

Just had the privilage of listening the revised version of this complete with new bassline, i think it works much better, the production on this track is awesome :love: :love:

im well into this track :clap: :clap:

[RichieV]

EVerything sounds rad except for the bass and the kick!
For some reason , they just don't sit well with every thing else!!
I really enjoyed everything else! Your production is very exact!!
i love it!

[EmotionComplex]

EVerything sounds rad except for the bass and the kick!
For some reason , they just don't sit well with every thing else!!
I really enjoyed everything else! Your production is very exact!!
i love it!

i thought the original version was good but theyve got it all sorted now imo, stick the new version up jon!! :love: .

i think the kicks fine, you have to remember the mastering process can make quite a difference and you have to leave certain things sounding a certain way before there mastered

[WEZ]

100% agree with that , new bass add to the flava in note work of that melody , corrrr blimey !

nice work ladz :clap:

[baptismo]

nice one guys :) heres a link for the revised version :)

www.highfishrecordings.co.uk/sneaky/invisible.mp3

Main things we did was a totally new bassline, sorted the kick out a bit and a few things mixdown wise :)

[EmotionComplex]

nice one guys :) heres a link for the revised version :)

www.highfishrecordings.co.uk/sneaky/invisible.mp3

Main things we did was a totally new bassline, sorted the kick out a bit and a few things mixdown wise :)

youve linked the wrong one mate :lol: :doh:

[baptismo]

nice one guys :) heres a link for the revised version :)

www.highfishrecordings.co.uk/sneaky/invisible.mp3

Main things we did was a totally new bassline, sorted the kick out a bit and a few things mixdown wise :)

youve linked the wrong one mate :lol: :doh:

oops! hehehehe heres the right one : www.highfishrecordings.co.uk/sneaky/invisible2ndmix.mp3

cheers for pointin that out mr complex! ;) :lol:

[EmotionComplex]

no problemo mate ;)

[Paul Nisbet]

gotta be honest, as im always pretty open with jon.... at first i just didnt like this!!!

But ive been sitting all day listenin, sorta 50/50. Whapped it onto cd then went up stairs as me parents left the house!

Whacked up the amp, and u know. Its ****in class indeed. Grown on me so much!!! lmfao!

Now from paul grumpy fussy guts, its gets a thumbs up!!! lmao! :dance:

[edk]

i really like this ! i love the twisting acid in the back ground, and they way that track moves you. Its defo got that log feel, but this is a good thing, i love this kinda stuff :clap: :clap: :clap:

[Dan.T.]

****ING TUNE!!!!

This is the best thing I have heard in a long time!! Lush strings and riff and the early bit of acid all work really well!

I've not been into all of Jons recent productions but this one with logan certianly gets my thumbs up! :clap:

Def gona give this a hammering!

[log:one]

much obliged!

[Barely Human]

To be honest, i really dont like this track :shock: Ive heard so many tracks like this, and i find it a dissapointment that one of the hotest new talents on the scene is knocking out the same standardised trance we,ve been hearing for ages. That aside, the production is awesome and i cant fualt for that, so good work in that sense, but not for the track im afraid. :cry:

[log:one]

and fair play to you!