Darkon systemic (Ultra Nano)

[Darkonsystemic]

Darkon systemic (Ultra Nano)

Thought i would post a link to a track iv made for a bit of feedback good or bad ta

link
http://collect.myspace.com/music/popup.cfm?num=0&time=undefined&fid=161306120&uid=1&t=IjLdQi1ato8fdJ5u3HBIxgc8JylRmSYtIKVVORmeKuk93KD9 XZIMC0omIIvya/1pfKibDDHMg4kNxJtvsumO2Q==d=MTYxMzA2MTIwXjEyMDAzMD YwMTc=

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Post up a better quality version somewhere man.. Really can't hear the production at all due to the bad mp3 quality, but I'd say you need some edits and such to move the main pattern along over the course of the track. Seems you have got the overall arrangement down with little breaks and so forth so that's good.