Second Song - Any tips welcomed

[Nomak]

Hi I have pretty much finished a second track, after starting about 5 since October and scrapping them.

Still need a lot of help, IM getting to grips with cubase a little more now, Im not happy with this, so any help is appreciated, I find the mixing down especially hard,and this tires my ears a bit.

The only thing I am happy with is the kick drum, I made it from 4 drum machine samples and a 909 hi hat, if it sounds crap please tell me lol

http://www.fileden.com/files/2007/10/17/1517320/Second_go.mp3

[Loop]

:)

[Loop]

Its alright man. Maybe use some fx and hi mid eq on your synths and some delays and filters on some elements to move it along a bit.
The kick and bass sound great in these pants headphones so maybe back off a touch there too.
I like it.

[Nomak]

Hey cheers for the info, I will try and do what you suggested, and see how it sounds, got some free time this afternoon so might try it now.

[xfive]

Definitely have pieces to work with here, I'd just say try using some compression on top of some grouped elements and eq to clean things up. Some fx and so forth can't hurt.. just experiment around.
Good start for a second track though