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BDC
03-05-2008, 04:29 AM
might need a couple of lil things here and there..tryin to keep things a bit simple...(i.e. lazy..haha)...but feel free to check it out thusfar....thanks!!!!


http://www.myspace.com/mrdecarlo

BloodStar
03-05-2008, 02:54 PM
any chance to d/l better quality mp3?

BDC
03-05-2008, 04:00 PM
any chance to d/l better quality mp3?


yeppers...I'm going to switch out a better quality mp3 this morning :)

BDC
04-05-2008, 05:40 PM
OK....so myspace is screwin around with me...but here's another link....

I added some elements here n there...might do a lil more though...we'll see.

I also shaved off the ends for the sake of saving you all some time listening.


http://www.brandondecarlo.com/bdc-Shellshocked%20Myspace%20Edit.mp3

BDC
04-05-2008, 05:50 PM
thanks for checkin it out :)

BloodStar
07-05-2008, 04:06 PM
nice funky track. kinda minimalistic feeling, proper groovin. only thing i am missing is some lead sounds, or generally speaking some synth action :-)
as for production, some hats are pretty sharp and i think it would be bit painfull hearing them on big rig. i would lp them somewhere around 12-16khz.
looking forward to next version.

stjohn
07-05-2008, 06:01 PM
deadly groove man! so much so that i think the sequence of the track doesnt compliment it enough. dont get me wrong here, the tune its nice and i would deffo play it, but i can imagine a weirder and less obvious progression working much better. even if it meant shuffling up the rides from oXoX to something else.. and throwing in some weird clips, claps and synthy stabs.
and some might deem the rising filter sweep as a bit cliché

sorry to be so nitpicky, but hey, i think the opportunity is there to turn a good track into a killer track.

.. great groove!! and great work ;)

BDC
17-05-2008, 02:03 AM
Thanks Y'all.....I'm going to take all those suggestions in mind when I go back to finish it up... :)

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