Elvio Neto - Sonar

[Elvio Neto]

its been a long time since i post a new track

i start using sonar 7.02 producer edition recently , this is my first track there

i only listened this one on my new Audio-Technica studio headphones...


all kinds of feedback are allways welcome.


http://www.zshare.net/audio/12343421f8eae98c/

[rhythmtech]

lookin forward to this elvio..

[rhythmtech]

firstly i think the overall thump of the track could be a little louder.. not sure how or if you mastered it but i all seems very flat, i'd personally put a mix bus compressor on with a short delay to give it a little more bouncey feeling overall.

hats seem a little thin, like they've had all the bottom eq'd out. while its obviously the right thing to do as the lows take up much needed space, i think you may have went a touch to far as they dont cut thru the mix now. they just kinda fizz about on top of it.

bass is fine. it works around the kick drum nicely.

i do feel the kick could have a little more oomph to it though.

i also think it needs a hook to bring it out of loopy territory.

overall the production is very good for a headphone mix but i think it needs a mix onn monitors just to iron out a few issues.

[Elvio Neto]

thanks rhythmtech , very nice review ;)

my next step is buy some monitors... cheap ones to start...

[ORIS]

nice mate. some quality ideas going on! loving the bassline!! progresses nicely and doesn't get to hectic which I like.

agree with rhythmtech though, it does need a little bit more punch/aggression.

but overall mate I'm impressed!

[Elvio Neto]

thanks ORIS ;)

[Siege]

Nice tune....like the sounds youve used and the little vocal snippet. Arrangment works well...just get the pointers already mentioned sorted and its nearly there......good work;)

[Elvio Neto]

thanks Siege

link down , i will post another one when i finish the track ;)