New track - Feedback please.

[Winds]

Almost finished my first track. Its not the first one I've started, but I've abandoned most of the others.

Would really appreciate it if you could give me some feedback, and advice on how to improve on it. Its my first track so please be kind!


Luke Winds - Wormhole - SoundCloud (http://soundcloud.com/luke-winds/wormhole)

Thanks :D

[Jants]

i do that start and abandom them got loadss of crap on hard drive
ya track really nice though =)