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[azid]

hey girls and guys, heres something i'm workin on. plz take some time for downloading, listening and some constructive critics, some feedback, some whatever... thx.

this is the link (http://8776.linkredirect.onetwomax.de/)

[azid]

noone listened to this? :cry:

[hiroprotagonist]

:shock: a little fast for my taste. but hard as hell. cant argue with a little anger thrown into a tune :twisted: . haha at 1:40 it really gets pumping. nice hard track i likes.

[dirty_bass]

Ok, well, this sort of over distorted techno is not my thing.
Distortion acts in the same way as compression, and flattens things out, making the mix less dynamic, and lacking in punch.
Howver, I do actually like this tune, it`s got good drive to it, and has a industrial metal feel.
The only thing is, is that it is all kick and high hat, the other elements don`t really rock the beat enough, so it gets very repetetive. Try adding some non distorted percussion into the mix, just to enhance the old 4x4 locked kicks, and add some swing into the beat (which in dance music is the most important element).
Also, the hats may be a little too prominent and dry.

Overall though, pretty good, and filthy nasty. :twisted:

[azid]

thx for your assessment, maybe helps to improve this one

[dan the acid man]

i agree with dirty bass, the kick and hats are too upfront in the mix, but still some good stuff going on, its not my kind of stuff but theres potential in here

[waldhaus]

bangs my butt ! i like it, its good hard schranz and nearly speedcore :D

[azid]

yeeehaaaa :bash: