Would like some feedback on this one..

http://www.michielbeek.com/tracks/0714.mp3

I might add a little more edits.. please let me know what you think..

Cheers! ;)

you have managed to create alot of space in the mix, it sounds great on headphone's, the only thing im not too keen on, is the kick.

i love the break though.

very nice, i love those industrial textures. a few tweaks here and there and your onto a winner.

the kick needs toning down a little its a little too upfront in comparison to all the other elements. or maybe there is just too much reverb on everything else? im a little unsure.

very nice though, 1 or 2 subtle tweaks and id buy this.