a few tracks

i got some tracks online for you to listen to and pass comment. dont expect anything good as im quite new to this, i just wanna know how things are coming along and what bits stand out as being shit so i can change em etc.. oh yeah im shit at arrangement so any pointers are welcomed.


1. http://www.dance-industries.com/track.asp?track_id=5928 - not too sure on this one , bass sounds nice in my speakers though.

2. http://www.dance-industries.com/track.asp?track_id=5902 - dont know what i was up too here, but again the bass is nice down this end. :doh:

3. http://www.dance-industries.com/track.asp?track_id=6022 - some shitty bass in this ,quite like the percussion though

4. http://www.dance-industries.com/track.asp?track_id=5763 - i think i went a bit over the top with t-racks on this not sure though.

5. http://www.dance-industries.com/track.asp?track_id=5663 - cheese.

Links didn't work for me hey soose!

down for me too.

1/ nice production on this one, the only thing i would maybe change is to turn down the shaker a little

2/ The kick is too middy on this one, it need's more bottom end, the hat patterns are great, they just need brightening up a little and some of the lower freq's taken out, i really like the tambourine/shaker.

3/ this track is your best imo, the kick sit's really nice, i love the bassline, maybe it just need's a bit more bottom end though, one thing i wasnt too keen on is the extreme panning of the hats.

4/ the production of this is a little too muddy and flat, but the track iteslf is pretty good

5/ this is much punchier, im not too sure of the kick though, too much decay for my liking.
i love the reverb soaked hit's in the background,but the hat's again are a little too dull.

feck. what bout this one http://www.dance-industries.com/dltr...?track_id=5763 if it doesnt work ill change the site.

they all worked for me, you just have to scroll down and select play

cheers for the comments dan, i'll set to work with some changes and stuff.

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Originally Posted by jesus

feck. what bout this one http://www.dance-industries.com/dltr...?track_id=5763 if it doesnt work ill change the site.

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Liking it, the sweep sound its a lil dirty either verb and chorus it or leave it grimey. I think the track needed more hats. But I'm loving the jack(I FECKIN' LOVE JACK!!!) in it. I would totally spin this with some mastering. Good Job Hey Soose!

cheers scummer ,good to know you like it :oops: i'll get into some hihating and heavy eq work .gonna change the sweeps a bit too and give them some variation. heres the rest straight download

1. http://www.dance-industries.com/dltr...?track_id=5928

2. http://www.dance-industries.com/dltr...?track_id=5902

3. http://www.dance-industries.com/dltr...?track_id=6022

5. http://www.dance-industries.com/dltr...?track_id=5663