BloodStar - Creeper

Hi,
I made up something new for listening. I tried to work more on hihats, and add some more elements to prevent the track to be too linear. hope this was succesfully done. Please listen.
comments are much appreciated.

Thanx a lot.....

==> BloodStar - Creeper <==

lovely crisp production that really sounds nice, but the noises are a little too narrow sounding, try some slight panning on some of the percussion and synths

Yeah, I agree with dan here. The Elements building this track sound too thin.
Sound modules?
Judicious use of EQ and Compression is needed here to fill the mix.

Nice drive to this though. ;)
It`s quite minimal, so you really need to add presence to the sounds
(sorry, more comments after second listen)

thanks for the usefull comments m8s. I'll try to tune the sounds and give them more presence in the mix. btw. I used a few Albinos, and DSP discovery also. this module doesn't sound too good.
thank you

All the snths you mentioned are fine. You just need to treat the sounds more. Compression (saturation) and some reverbs, or filter delays n stuff to fill em out.

Both synths are good but in the mix sound bit unspiced. I'll try to polish them more. Thanks for the comments DirtyBass...much appreciated..