New track. Anything you dont like about this let me know. Thanks
http://www.forbiddensilence.co.uk/au...he_templar.mp3
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New track. Anything you dont like about this let me know. Thanks
http://www.forbiddensilence.co.uk/au...he_templar.mp3
Yeah, nice so far, quite sparse but everything in its right place. Feel it could do with a zappy noise or effect somewhere to add itself alongside the melody that comes in, it's a nice melody but needs more than drums to stop it sounding monotonous. I like the feel of this though, reminds me of some of the slower and darker stuff Glenn Wilson used to do or indeed "Thunder" by Dave Clarke, which is a compliment btw. ;)Quote:
Originally Posted by The Divide
Yea I agree. It needs more elements on that section where it drops the vox and the synth. My problem is its hard not to clutter with the vocals. Just listening back and I think it needs re arranging
http://www.forbiddensilence.co.uk/audio/35C%2011ma.mp3
this could be awesome..............no pressure :lol:
the sample is great, the only thing im not sure about is the kick, maybe it's a bit too middy
Could be the snare thats layed up on to it. Ill have a lookQuote:
Originally Posted by dan the acid man
www.forbiddensilence.co.uk/audio/35C_16ma.mp3
Now were in motion man. And it's sinister as fudge this time!
Great track! Kick really does sound a bit middy, but other than that :clap: And i just love the beginning... but not really shure about the melodies that appear later....
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yes please.
id buy this one.
I actually like the kick, it adds a good stompy feeling to the track, and it sounds in place with the rest of the percussion. Vocal is awsome.
Great stuff as always.
Just hope it's gonna be a bit longer than 2 mins in the end? ;)
Yikes, i got really pissed with this and changed it ages ago. I was hoping this thread would die lol :neutral: Better get back on this soon, right now I need a holiday
www.forbiddensilence.co.uk/audio/35D02.mp3
I have changed a lot of the elements in this, just trying to get the mix alright at the moment. The structure will probably change but ime open to any suggestions anyways back in a weeks time, ****ing workin away. :evil:
reminds me of henry's "human animal". nice one.
oh yes!
i love the changes in 35D02 so far , this is serious mechanical filth
www.forbiddensilence.co.uk/audio/35D03.mp3
Probs make it come in better after the longer break down
this is sounding alot better, especially the kick, im still loving the vocal sample :cool: