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techno44

to finish>>>

it's late here so i had to listen to it at low volume, so please take this all with a grain of salt...
you said this was a rough version ie not finished. so i'll go easy. i think your ride that you have going all the way though seems a little loud. i'd lower it a bit, pitch it up 2semi tones, pan it a little to the right or left and add a slight reverb to give it that shine that i think is oh so nice on rides.

that's all i can really comment on cause all i can really hear are those rides at this volume. but i can see the potential in this and i like some of the ideas and the patterns in this. finish it off oh and maybe bring up your lower mid range in volume.

but what do i know really. :gutted:

I agree with DSP, I also think that the ride goes on for to long in the track, use the ride as a lift in certain areas of your track rather then having it go throughout most of the track. Other then that it's sounding good!! Keep up the hard work.

thanks for comments, really helpful! :cool:

think it's almost cooked.

44v0.2

10 seconds in and I`m loving it.
Nice use of polyrythmic elements.
Generally nice.
Like a very smooth steve stoll tune.
This is the best thing I`ve heard from you dude.
I love it, I`d play it if it was on vinyl.
Only thing I can pick out, is that the mid range lacks any sounds with substance, like something that goes "chonk" or something. Something with a bit more punch, to make it more fun to mix.
Wicked track.

yessssssss! I love this tune...very full, very busy, very interesting..nice arrangements, good use of samples, plenty of synthy noises/stabs...yeah ...10/10 :clap: :clap:

yes, this is a pretty nice tune, it does need a little more to the mids as dirty bass said, everything else though sounds spot on

ok, gonna sort out the mids. cheers guys. :)

love the high range elements, very intricate, and the bass?... it just rocks.

i think the ride is beneficial to the track, but i would suggest using it over 8/16 bars at a couple of different sections of the track. id buy this, no questions asked.

i agree with DB. this is your best yet.