Spark - Remarkable Progress

http://www.yourdee.com/Spark_-_Remarkable_Progress.mp3

Savetargetas.. .

Hope to get some comments :rambo:

man.. overcompressed:clipping all over.. needs much work i'd say sound like a banger though.

this with some cleaning up could be a good track, it has been over compressed and there is alot of clipping

This is very nice, but as said before the clipping and overcompression is killing the mix.
Maybe send the parts you want to compress to a separate Bus, leaving out some elements from the whole pumping compression equation.
That way you can have some clean elements mixed in with the dirt.