New member, and a new tune..

Hi everyone. I'm walrus. Some of you might know me from other discussion boards and irc channels and stuff (I've noticed a few familiar handles). I've not posted here before, but I thought I'd give it a whirl :)

Anyway, on to the tune.. here's a little something I've been working on in a hard, breaky purist techno sort of vein. If that sounds like its up your alley, give it a listen.
Although I've written quite a bit of drum n bass and breakbeat hardcore before, this is my first real try at producing techno, so any feedback or pointers anyone can offer would be really helpful.
Check the tune at:

http://www.yuj00.dial.pipex.com/spacermx.rm

Also, seeing as its a remix, and you're very unlikely to have heard the original tune, I've uploaded the original, so you can see what's different in my remix.

http://www.yuj00.dial.pipex.com/space.rm

cheers! :)

-walrus

nice 1 for posting but: (ever the honest feedback!!!!!)

it's just way to basic and sounds more like techno orientated trance than techno. try to put more drum sounds into your production if you wanna make driving techno. that's my tip anyway.

Fair enough. Cheers for the feedback.. I'll give it a go :)

-walrus