something dark and slow

only been on this a couple of days. it's my first attempt at this sort of track, so any feedback/tips would be very much appreciated.

in progress

Cant realy offer any production advice (just a DJ man!!) - but it sounds real nice - the bass/kick really come to life on my monitors.

Wasn't really into the first vocal loop which pops in every couple of bars - maybe work on letting that tom groove come out a bit more as I could hear it in the background but maybe it would add a bit of variety to the groove if it was more predominant for a bit? and maybe add a different kind of hat pattern (maybe electro style?) and add a few little edits?

But it sounds real nice sort of stuff I could play in a warm-up set :clap:

thanks meng. i am planning on doing a bunch of edits but wanted to make sure the structure was ok first. will try to eq the toms better too.

cheers

this is quite good, i like the toms, they add a nice rhythm, some off the sounds though merge a little too much, they could do with some selective eq'ing