Ok here it is
still working out a few tiny things but its pretty much done
If you have any grievances with the mix ! please let me know!
http://www3.telus.net/joanmey/Pressure-01.mp3
ok thanks
RichieV
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Ok here it is
still working out a few tiny things but its pretty much done
If you have any grievances with the mix ! please let me know!
http://www3.telus.net/joanmey/Pressure-01.mp3
ok thanks
RichieV
Hey man I thought my monitors were broken when i first listened to this!! Intro is a bit lopsided on the old panning front dont you reckon?? Nice "pressure" sample good tone on the distortion ;) bass line is a bit ....well t delivers less than you hoped for in the build up but better than a hardstyle WUB WUB any day of the week ;) dont like the piano in the break sorry mate it just didnt fit in i honestly thought my cat was walking down my keyboard it didnt sound at home to me... ok things are still bubbling on...waiting for the main riff to come in...i like the riff youve used sounds slightly "digital" though if you know what I mean?? nice spooky break again...like the evil noises but that piano needs a good heavy injection of reverb IMO.....I think you should introduce something new for the main melody after the break cos it seems a bit regressive (is that a word?) using the same patch - need somehting bigger and stronger to really define the track....i liek the acid you have going off here...maybe drop the melody and utilise more of those dark errie sounds in the brek and a bit of acid???? just my opinion....id give this about 7/10 few tweaks here and there needed i reckons...
hope you dont think im being too harsh mate just typing what comes into my head as im listening to it...
not at all man!
bad feed back is better than no feedback
What i mean is appreciate any feedback at all. You don't get better by people saying everything right with the song.
Yes you were harsh and i thank you for that!!
Thats cool mate it wasnt supposed to come over perhaps quite as critical as it did :oops:
this kind of sounds like a dry export with all channel processing removed, the sequence sounds like its got a lot of potential but its pretty bare at the moment.
the actual track reminds me of something youd hear on anthem which cant be too bad but its definetly in need of a heavy processing session to bring everything out and like dave said the panning is favouring the left speaker quite a bit.
granted it is only a 96kbps mp3 but it still gives you an idea of whats lacking.
i can see this being a good track after a couple of hours sat at the desk and a careful mixdown though
ok guys
reworked it alot
http://www3.telus.net/joanmey/DEMOSO...sureMaster.mp3
love to hear what you think about this one
Yeah this is good. I like it cause it's different. Definitely releasable I would say. Thought the intro went on a bit much and didn't like the piano bit as much as if something a little darker had come in. But no, this is a really commendable effort. Good shit!
not a bad effort at all mate , i like it :clap: :clap:
i havent got any moinotrs set up at the moment cos ive been rearranging shit in the house but ive downbloaded trhis and ill have a listen soon as ;)
i cant download it!
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