Subroutine presents... TheEnd (Dark gothic techno)

Something I'm working on. Kinda stuck for ideas, looking for feedback...

http://members.shaw.ca/subroutine/Muzik/TheEnd128.mp3

Help me out here fellas.

I like this!

very clear and nice atomsheric synth sounds. The percussion could use a bit more development and it could use a string of ride cymbals but I'm an acid techno head so I would say that. I just think it gives it more pace. Nice and simple track but doesn't quite do enough. needs to change more.

good effort!