Hard an Banging- Somthing slightly different!

New tune ive been working on, not finished yet as it only goes up to the break, but any coments welcome :D

http://iq.britersen.co.uk/IQ-Distilled%20Persentage.mp3

not bad at all m8.

at first i thought it sounded quite trancey but then it kicks off nicely.

just a thing. i think your stuff can sound a little trancey cause of the top end being very clean. i'd love to hear a mix of this with a more distorted/aggressive top end.

Sorted mate, i'll try and dirty it up with and elastic band and my mums old dishcloth! I'll post it up when ive done it.

Ive messed about with the top end of it and taken a lot of the reverb of as i though it was making the mix all washy. Im still having trouble getting that agresiveness out of the snares and top end, any ideas?
Here's the new version:-

http://iq.britersen.co.uk/Distilled.mp3

distortion.... distort your top end man... there's too much politeness in your sound.

sorry if that came across bad :oops: ... your sound is good but if you make the top end more mechanical and dirty i think you'll be onto something...

politeness ha ha ha.

f**k off...

hahahahahhahaaha

another very cool work in progress. keep on. :D

tell you wot mate i really like this i think it sounds wikkid fair play to yer mate :D

Cheers mate, but i just have to knuckle down and get it finished. I have a terible problem with starting a tune and then getting bored with it and starting another, and i have about 200 unfinished tunes siting there!

same prob here!