Just plain odd.

http://homepage.ntlworld.com/peter.north80/fat.mp3

Would appreciate your thoughts on this one. have tried to break away from the usual style and added some more intricacies.

This is ok, but it doesnt grab me, it could maybe do with a bit more groove, the kick is a little too loud in the mix aswell.
I like the mind bending kind of synth that comes in later.

I like this. The level of the kick is borderline but i think that it could carry quite nicely through a rig. Not sure about the 303, the riff hooked me in but i feel another sound would do it more justice.

J Smart

Methinks it sucks. It was trying to be this:

http://www.blackoutaudio.co.uk/phpBB...ic.php?t=28629