Is this cool or not? I can't tell.

This is a remix. I loved the original but his one seems a little odd.

http://homepage.ntlworld.com/peter.n...oothpick3d.mp3

comments welcomed.

Link isn't working.... you forgot the .mp3

not really linking the track.... not really into the hardhouse sounds you're using... like the beat tho....

Pretty good acid techno.
A lot of the levels need to be balanced a bit better.
The main riff is massively louder than everything else, and almost sounds like it has been overdubbed, so could be brought down somewhat.
Everything else in the mix is quite dull and muddy in comparison to the brightness and presence of the main riff.
A good zero level restart on the desk should do the job.
Get some more space into the mix with subtractive eq, and more brighness and clarity into the sounds.