Urban pHox - Bass of Bermondsey

Hi,

here's a little snippet (2 bars) of a track I'm working on, I made the sample loop but when mp3 converting it seems to add some silences at the beginning and end of the file.

Urban pHox - Bass of Bermondsey

Anyhow I haven't done any arrangement yet and I have a fair few other variations on the bassline but just thought I'd see if you guys (n gals) could give me a little constructive feedback.

Hope you don't trash my terrible bandwidth but it's quite small...

FYI - Equipment list used in this track...
Roland TR606 (hats, cymbals, snare)
Pentium 2 333MHz PC running Buzz (bass drum, synths) then edited in Sonar 1.

liking the bass line on it. Sounds like it could be a nice chilled tune that