curly "oop"

www.studio61.org/tunes/oop.mp3

This is the latest piece I have been working on. In a diffrent style to my other stuff, this is more happy and far less angry, I think the bass line need more varition, and some other bits need working on too. I am realy intrested in comments on my mixing down.

cheers for your help.

i like the bassline, and i agree it needs more variation. i dont really like that other sounds too musch in the track.

was this done in fruityloops by any chance ?

Interesting tune.
The mixdown needs some work.
Overall, everything sounds very dry, and could do with some more effects, used subtley to give everything a little movement and sparkle.
The main synth is overpowering and too loud in the mix.
it makes it hard to judge the levels of the other parts, but they sound fine.
Overall, some good use of compression to phatten out the sounds would help add presence as well.

i think the track sounds a bit too thin, and those strings in there need to be phattend up some how, maybe a bit lower in the mix, cause it gets kinda annoying after while, that same constant note.........

also bringing up that bassline would work