another pice of hard shit.... ;)
just 155 bpm techno...
download here
comments/critics welcome
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another pice of hard shit.... ;)
just 155 bpm techno...
download here
comments/critics welcome
I think overall it has a good noise techno type of sound. Very similar to that of BabyCore and the stuff on FIREBALL. However i think it could use a bit more movement in there to keep in interesting. Dispite the edits, the track is very much the same all of the way thru...
it wasnt my intention to copy other sounds or smthg like that. i dont like too much movements in tracks (that schould be part of the dj (hehe, if it ever will be played)), i think less is more sometimes.Quote:
Originally Posted by messanger
so big thx for listening, feel free to post more critics, thats why i posted this track here.
greets
No my friend I wasn't saying you were copying someone. I was sayign that it sounds like something in that realm...no worries.Quote:
it wasnt my intention to copy other sounds or smthg like that.
hehe, ok. thx.Quote:
Originally Posted by messanger
BURPS...
Niet echt mijn kopje thee ( not really my cup of tea)
Think the mix needs some work... everything is kinda stuck together... try to widen the mix a bit...
think the editz are nice get the global idea of what you are trying to reach just put some more time in it.....
dont know if its the quality of the mp3, but its really muddy and squashed
i think some brightening and more variations would help a bit. also, it sounds so mono, but again, i dont know if thats the mp3 file
ok, i see some work is needed here.. thx to all for the improvement suggestions!! :!:
this is f*cking wicked
Needs a bit more low end IMO.
Some rhythmic kicks or a bassline.
Nice work apart from that.
Take the highend down, its harsh on the ears at loud volumes. On a quick listen however it seems good enough though!
This is a nice peice of noise... I do agree that it is quite samey, but then as part of a mix that's not a prob if that's what your aiming for it to be. I like the tune loads and there's some good edits and breaks.
I think what people have said bout the production's right. It does sound harsh to be and the low end needs a bit more thump. I think it could sound good with the quite compressed cruncyness, but as I'm learning and having pointed out to me - everything else does then need to be so much more spot on I think.
Like to hear the final result.
relentless stuff. the broken beat section was quite expected, i like the didge-like drones used there too. the production style is quite cool, but as has been said, it is a little lacking in depth & clarity - will make a nice track if this is improved a bit.