dutty beats

been liking a lot of grime stuff ive heard recently and thought id have a go at it. not techno, i know, but it'd still be nice to get a few comments on the production side of things.....

heres a few bars.....

http://homepage.ntlworld.com/family.stevens2/groime.mp3

Sounds cool man but for this sorta thing you have to make all the sounds bigger and thicker since there aren't too many of them...
Could be a nice start to something tho ;)

rather short sample, but actually sounds pretty good

i just dont like the reverb on that bass, i'd rather here a delay (just my personally)

i'd like to hear where this track goes

cheers for listening, and yeh, sorry bout the length.....

so you reckon everything needs fattening up a bit xfive? or did you just mean certain parts?

i was considering the possibility of a vocal line when i started this, so wanted to leave a little room in the mix. saying that i might just fill the gaps with some more sounds, or reinforce the current ones. hmm. decision time.

ill try replacing the verb on the bass with a delay too, though i quite like how it's sounding at the moment, so we shall see.....